LLM-assisted writing in biomedical publications through excess vocabulary
LLM “Excess Vocabulary” and Weasel Words
- Commenters focus on the paper’s finding that words like “delves,” “potential,” “significant,” and a long list of “excess style words” have surged.
- Some see these as vague, business‑hype vocabulary that obscures meaning, echoing Orwell’s criticism of abstract, obfuscatory language.
- There is debate over “significant”: in statistics it is precise, but in generic prose it’s seen as a weasel word unless clearly defined.
- One person argues that trends for “delves” are confounded by its use in games (WoW, Magic: The Gathering, YouTube essays), suggesting not all lexical changes are due to LLMs.
Recognition of “LLM‑ese” in Practice
- Many say “delves” and patterns like “it’s not just X, it’s Y” are now strong LLM fingerprints.
- Some like the clarity and tidy structure of LLM output but find the repetitive style and buzzwords grating.
- Anecdotes describe professionals unknowingly revealing LLM use through emojis and characteristic explanation patterns.
Non‑Native Authors, Translation, and Editing
- Several note that the majority of English‑language scientific papers are written by non‑native speakers; pre‑LLM, expensive “Author Services” filled this gap.
- One side argues LLMs are “masterful translators” and a clear win for accessibility and equity, often improving clarity over human‑written drafts.
- The opposing side worries non‑native authors may miss subtle but important shifts in meaning, and advocates for human editors familiar with both language and domain.
Responsibility, Accuracy, and Misuse
- Concern that authors may over‑delegate responsibility to LLMs, blaming “the tool” when nuance or correctness is lost.
- Others counter that responsibility ultimately remains with the authors, just as with human editing or tax professionals.
- Some mention broader issues: publication pressure, fabricated results, and the reproducibility crisis, with LLMs potentially making low‑quality papers appear more credible.
Equity, Bias, and the Role of Writing in Science
- The article’s “equity in science” framing is criticized via an example of a mis‑resolved citation, interpreted as over‑reliance on automated tools.
- One view: writing skill is integral to scientific thinking; if a researcher can’t articulate findings, the science itself is suspect.
- Counterview: writing and science are distinct skills; tools that lower the writing barrier let more capable scientists contribute, especially non‑native English speakers.
- Some worry about “dumbing down” and cultural soft power of English‑centric, Western‑trained LLMs; others see this as another in a long line of technological shifts that reallocate, rather than destroy, skills.